GRE作文点评:一篇ISSUE
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“We can learn much more from people whose views we share than from people [b]whose ciews contradict our own."---ISUEE 96 [b][b][b]There is much debate over whether we benefit more from similar views. Some [b]people maintain that we can learn much more from people whose views we [b]share than from people whose view contradict our own, while others, by [b]contrast, hold a negative argument. As far as I am concerned, these two [b]resources are of same importance, and they can also complement each other. [b][b]Common sense tells us that the more we experienced, the more we get. [b]Obviously, personal experience is an important resource of knowledge. [b]However, individual experiences are too limited to hold up one’s [b]intelligence. To be knowledgeable, we also learn others’ experiences, for [b]example, the experiences systemized and published as textbooks. In [b]addition, there is a statistics (collected ) which indicates that people [b]who hold the same views as ours are much easier to share their experiences [b]with us. In other words, we may get more valuable experiences from people [b]with whom we agree. For these reasons, I recommend that from people whose [b]views we share can we get more benefits. [b][b]However, sometimes, we can benefit from contradicting views. First, [b]contradicting views can help complement and perfect our views. As discussed [b]above, one’s own experiences are limited, so it is inevitable for some [b]people that their original argument on some events are deficient, to some [b]extent, bigoted. Meanwhile, the opposite point of view may also be [b]inadequate. But if we consider these two standpoints together, we will find [b]that the one is the counterpart of the other. Second, contradicting views [b]can provide us with new solutions and new perspectives. Different people [b]have different solutions on how to deal with a problem. It varies because [b]of one’s unique experience, and we cannot tell who is correct or whose [b]method is the best. But when compared, every solution has its own [b]advantage. In my opinion, it is wise for us to consider various views and [b]take their advantages in our own. [b][b]To conclude, both equivalent views and contradicting views, although in [b]different cases, benefit us equally. Judging from all evidence offered, we [b]may arrive at the conclusion that every one has his advantage, and every [b]point of view is better than others to some extent, we should take all [b]advantages in our own and make us more intelligent. (380 words) [b][b]请不吝赐教,不好的地方请指出,如果偶有比较合适的地方请告诉我,以后好发扬之。另 [b]外,380是不是少了点 [b][b][b]____________ [b]beckyyee[[url=http://www.gter.net/]寄托天下[/url]作文版斑竹]的点评 [b][b]我觉得...全文推理的句子太多,再加些例子可能会更好。 [b][b]还有文章可以再写深入一些。比如 the interrelationship between similar views [b]and contradicting views...... [b][b]优点我觉得句式较灵活,全文结构也很清晰。不过对于issue来说,380字确实少了。 [b][b]个人意见
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