TOPIC [b]"In our time ,specialists of all kinds are highly over-rated. We need more [b]generalists_people who can provide broad perspectives." [b][b]下面是ets BENCHMARK 5和READER COMMENT中的认为有错的部分句子 [b]1。原句： when a sickness progresses or becomes diagnosed as a disease that [b]requires more care than a family doctor can procide ,he may be referred to [b]a specialist. [b]ETS COMMENT: the lack of a pronoun referent [b]我的修改：.这一句本人不懂，恳请指教。不知道代词缺在哪里？ [b]2。原句：someone who knows how iit begins ,progresses,and specified [b]treatments. [b]ETS COMMENT：an error in parrel structure [b]我的修改：someone who knows how it begins ,progresses ,ang gets specified [b]treatments. [b]3. 原句： Generalized teachers are required to begin molding students at a [b]very early age so they can get ready for the future ahead of them in [b]gaining more facts about the basic subjects and finding out new facts on [b]the old ones. [b]ETS COMMENT:loose syntax and imprecise language [b]我的修改：Generalized teachers are required to begin molding students at a [b]very early age and induct them into more facts about the basic subjects, [b]based on which,the students can find out new facts and get ready for the [b]future before them . [b][b][b]我想我们要得高分，首先得分析ets的范文极其点评，看看ets的观点是什么，在乎什么。大 [b]家对上面的分析有什么看法，或者对ets的范文有更多的分析，欢迎跟贴。 [b]谢谢 [b]