新东方GRE笔记-作文
寄托天下 2005-03-19 04:39 浏览3987次
一. 注意事项[b][b]好的语言组织;精准的词汇;句子结构的多样性;出众的想法;文章的长度;段落的数量(通常是五个)[b][b]二. 找出未经证实的假设[b]The argument requires___that /assumes without……[b][b]Clarification, confirmation, establishment, qualification,warrant[b][b]三. 找出错误。然后用逻辑的语言表达出来,通常作为topic sentence。根据每个topic sentence来组织每一段。最后将所有的段落连接起来,要注意使用连词,保证段落之间的过渡流畅。[b][b]四. 阅读文章的时候注意“绝对化”的语言![b]常见的错误:False analogy; Hasty generalization; Assumption without confirmation[b][b]常用的句型:The arguer failed to demonstrate/convince us that (failed to provide adequate information)[b][b]the arguer assumes without confirmation that[b][b]it is totally possible that [b][b]draw a general conclusion about reliability on the basis of a sample that is likely to be biased[b][b]fails to acknowledge the possibility that [b][b]treat XXXX as XXXX[b][b]it proceeds as if a condition, XXXXX, is the only condition under which XXXX[b][b]No allowance is made[b][b]五. 错误分类[b]1. control experiment 特例否定“绝对”,但是否定不了“一般”[b]2. Hasty generalization[b]3. False analogy[b]4. Comparative Problem 平行比较、垂直比较、选择性比较[b]5. Evidence Practicality[b]6. False dilemma 比如,“either……or……”[b]7. No causal relationship 两件事情先后发生并不意味着二者之间有因果关系;两件事情之间有联系,并不意味着两件事情之间是因果关系;混淆了结果和效果[b][b][b]Issue Writing[b][b][b][b]文章写作要点:[b]1.第一段要表明立场,不能出现事例,但是可以出现让步[b]2.文章结构清晰,都有topic sentence[b]3.每段要有论据[b][b]学习要点[b]熟悉题库,掌握论证方法,限时/不限时的练习[b][b]一. 典型立场(要求立场鲜明)[b]1. 完全同意[b]2. 完全不同意[b]3. 部分同意[b]4. 部分反对[b]5. 折衷立场(尽量少用)[b][b]二. 文章结构(五段论)[b]1. 开头第一段,introduction[b]2. 结尾段,conclusion[b]3. 文章中间[b]平行式 三段 全部为正面例子[b]让步式 三段 第三段让步[b]对照式 两段[b][b]三. 文章格式[b]每段顶格写,每段间空两行(按两次回车),一行约为11个字[b][b]四. 注意事项[b]1. 使用standard English[b]2. 文体意识:议论文要客观,不出现感叹语气以及“!”“!?”等标点符号;不用you作为泛指,而用one或者a person等;尽可能少用we;不使用比喻和抒情句子,但是可以使用类比[b]3. 语言:避免陈词滥调,比如in my view(几乎每个人都用)[b]不用as we all know,过于口语化[b]不用more and more,用increasingly[b]绝对不用every coin has two sides(英语中没有这个谚语)[b]中国谚语不用,成语可以以讲故事的方式写明白[b]多用被动语态,表示客观[b]用无灵主语,比如it等,也就是说:不用I, you 这一类的[b]多用名词作主语[b]多用从句和插入成分[b][b]五,文章的开头[b][b]任务:讲明文章的论述内容,你的立场。最好文字比较引人入胜[b][b]常用类型[b]1. 回顾当前形势,表明立场[b]2. 阐明互相矛盾的两个观点,表明立场[b]3. 提出问题并给于一个答案,表明立场[b]4. 讲述一个趣闻,表明立场[b]5. 开门见山,直接表明立场[b]6. 引用谚语(不是中国的谚语)[b]例子:[b]1.Social progress, an indispensable part of human life whose meaning varies from place to place, has come to the sole standard of social well-being of people[b][b]Reputation, a term whose definition/an inevitable part of success which brings pride in its wake, may sometimes lead to downfall great heroes[b][b]2.Some argue/suggest/claim that ~~~~~while others maintain/insist that~~~~~[b][b]There is an on-going debate over~~~~~~. Some people who oppose ~~~suggest that ~~~~~ while others who advocate ~~~~~ would claim that ~~~~[b][b]3. the answer apparently lies not in ~~~~ but in ~~~~~[b][b]4. It is reported that in the latest issue of TIME that ~~~~~~[b][b]college professor, factory worker, office employee, business executive,这些可以用来举例[b][b]John——bright, talented, bound to success——ended up a plumber. “~~~~” he remarked, “~~~~~”. John’s case is a typical example of people who ( a typical situation in which)~~~~~~. There is variety of factors to explain his failure[b][b]五. 文章的正文[b][b]可以用来论证的材料:历史事实、统计数据(注意用奇数,而且要再加上自己的评论和分析)、普通的例子、引用权威的话语、某些逸闻趣事[b][b]例子:[b]History offers many examples ~~~~~[b]Past experience has taught people that ~~~~~~[b]Past two decades witnessed sweeping changes[b][b]One recent example involves ~~~~~~~~~[b][b]According to a recent survey conducted by ~~~~~~, 27% of college students ~~~~~~[b]The report indicates that ~~~~~~~~[b]A researcher at CSPS(Campus Students’ Problem Society) warns that ~~~~~[b][b]Professor A commented in his epoch-making masterpiece 书名,published in as early as 1993, that ~~~~~~(with slight abridgement/adjustment/edition of mine)(and I paraphrase). His remarks reveals a universal truth that ~~~~~~[b][b]As the Chinese philosopher Kongzi(known as his lantinized name as Confucius)[b][b]六. 文章的结尾[b]重述你的立场,总结你的立场成立的理由[b][b]这一段一定要简洁,言简意赅[b]例子:[b]表决心[b]it is high time/necessary/imperative that measures be taken to ~~~~~~~~~[b][b]提出警告[b]If the current situation is left unchecked, severe consequences ~~~~~~~~~[b][b][b]如何写好句子[b]1.-ing开头[b]Standing on the riverside, the master sighs: “May time go on and on like this, never ceasing day and night.”[b][b]Who, being innocent, has ever perished?[b][b]2.-ed开头[b]I, disappointed, yet not despaired, ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~[b][b]A gust of wind, all of a sudden, breaks the silence of lake[b][b]3. 同位成分[b]If he has the spirit of absolute selflessness, he is noble-minded and pure, a man of moral integrity[b][b]4.-ly开头[b]Quietly I take my leave[b]As quietly as I came here[b]Quietly I wave good-bye[b]To my clouds in the western sky[b][b]Admittedly, apparatently, amazingly, etc[b][b]5.to开头[b]to be humane is to be human[b][b]6.介词开头[b]on the contrary, if your enemy is hungry, feed him; if your enemy is thirsty, give him something to drink; in doing this you keep burning coals on his head[b][b]But man, despite all his riches, cannot endure[b][b]8. 从句开头[b]whoever digs a hole may fall into it
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