[b]编辑点评：[/b]托福写作有时很容易：20分钟可以学会三种句型的运用。托福写作有时也很难，难点在于怎样用地道英文表达？本文带你走进地道英语的世界，一起来看如何写出地道的托福英语。 [align=center][img]http://i1.sinaimg.cn/edu/cr/2013/1202/1652623163.jpg[/img][/align][align=center]　　“烤鸭”必读：教你打造地道托福写作[/align]　　托福写作有时很容易：20分钟可以学会三种句型的运用。托福写作有时也很难，难点在于怎样用地道英文表达？本文带你走进地道英语的世界，一起来看如何写出地道的托福英语。 　　句子： 　　[b]1. The artist&0#39;s work pushes our civilization to a higher level。[/b] 　　改进：Artists&0#39; work upgrades our civilization。 　　[b]2. For example, you work in a big factory。[/b] 　　改进： Suppose you work in a big factory。 　　[b]3. You&0#39;ll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job。[/b] 　　改进：You&0#39;ll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career。 　　[b]4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck。[/b] 　　改进： We will get nowhere if we rely on luck。 　　[b]5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level。[/b] 　　改进： He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life。 　　[b]6. Their brain is still very young。[/b] 　　改进： They are still immature。 　　[b]7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things。[/b] 　　改进： Dissatisfaction impels people for the better。 　　[b]8. They can&0#39;t analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong。[/b] 　　改进： They cannot tell right from wrong。 　　[b]9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time。[/b] 　　改进： It will help children learn to make good use of time。 　　[b]10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life。[/b] 　　改进： Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it。 　　以上是考生们在托福写作中经常出现的中国式英语经过修改后的地道英语的对比，从中找出不同来知道地道英语到底怎么写的，从而运用到托福写作中。