环球名师5月22日讲座:破解5月16日最新雅思写作考题(范文)
环球写作金牌教师 钟钰
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2009年5月16日最新雅思Task 2 写作考题
It has been believed that people reading for pleasure have developed better imagination and language skills than people who prefer to watch TV. Do you agree or disagree?
环球名师钟钰 破解考题步骤
1.审 题
关键词是哪些?
Reading for pleasure
To watch TV
Imagination
Language skills
前两个关键词给出辩论的双方
后两个关键词给出ideas
2.Brainstorming
1) Which is better for imagination, reading or watching TV?
Reading: active thinking, use imagination
Watching TV: passive receiver, receive messages and pictures which are edited by reporters and editors.
有没有支持的论据?
可以用举例法,对比法
2) Which is better for language skills, reading or watching TV?
Reading: beautiful expressions, well-written materials;but out-dated and fixed expressions,
Watching TV: listening ability, language programs, real-life expression; but once and for all, coarse or disorderly spoken language
有没有支持的论据?
可以用举例法,对比法
3.决定文章结构
从以上ideas看,reading for pleasure 拥有较多论点和论据,于是拟写的文章选择一面倒型。
1)一面倒基本结构
Introduction
Paragraph supporting reading (long)
Paragraph supporting TV watching (short)
Conclusion
2)具体段落安排
Introduction
a) Introduction of the topic (引出话题)
Topic: reading for pleasure better than TV watching in terms of imagination and language skills?
b) Thesis statement (中心思想)
I prefer reading for pleasure
Paragraph for reading
a) Topic sentence
Reading is a good way to develop imagination and language skills.
b). 论点2个
1)Reading: active thinking, use imagination
举例 detective novel, 对比 TV watching a passive process
2)Reading: beautiful expressions
对比 TV once and for all, coarse or disorderly spoken language
Paragraph for TV watching
a) Topic sentence
TV watching has its advantages.
举例 listening foreign languages.
b) 转折
However, less important than reading.
Conclusion
a) Conclusion (结论)
Reading for pleasure better than TV watching in terms of imagination and language skills.
b) Summary (总结)
To bring imagination into play and enhance language skills
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